[ilds] writing brings release

James Gifford odos.fanourios at gmail.com
Tue Sep 18 19:26:18 PDT 2007

Without the monster, how would one write?  Without the pit, why would one?

I agree quite strongly with Bruce's reading of LD's poetry, although I 
think he took very great care with those things he chose not to control 
-- I see allusion, rhythm, and image all (typically) working in a 
careful balance, though I doubt he'd care if the poem ends somewhere 
other than where it starts, which might leave Donne quite undone.

And besides, Donne is effective when you figure something out -- I think 
Durrell's most effective when we don't...  How exciting would it be if 
we had certainty over exactly what the pit is?  As it stands, I'll more 
than likely stick my own 'pit' in the place of the one Durrell leaves 

The allusions, however, tease one into action...


william godshalk wrote:
> Okay, the monster may be a skeleton in the closet. Perhaps the image 
> does fit in though with "Cannot write." The persona can't get the 
> monster out of the closet because the persona cannot write him out. 
> Writing would bring release.
> At 08:36 PM 9/18/2007, you wrote:
>> Bill, I tend not to read Durrell's poems, on the whole, as an 
>> argument, in the same way that, say, Donne's poetry is -- with 
>> scene, speaker, and addressee, all following a certain logic.  I 
>> don't know how well Durrell was in control of his imagery and 
>> development or, indeed, how interested he was in trying to control 
>> it.  So, I don't know how worthwhile it is to say a = b = c, 
>> therefore, we end up with d.  I'd be quite happy to read the 
>> "monster in the booth" as some skeleton in Mr. Durrell's own private 
>> closet, one which he chose not to define.
>> Bruce

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